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~ tension ~

         i.

still.    cool.     silent  the water  waits.



        ii.

one could almost feel the tension
thickening lengthening interminable;
yet daren't touch
     dare not disturb

                 this Blessed Place
                 this Holy    Peace



~ disturbance ~

         iii.

patient.    eager.    anon,  the ripple   spreads.


         iv.

ah! at last.     it is  done.
           it is   broken.
           it is        begun.
the energy imparted;    a promise kept
          
     stony silence
             now a whisper


~ release ~

           v.

hush now.    wait for it.
it comes for you.    it comes to you.

it comes.


echo.


anew.





~ gREY -
©2006-2008 ~dgREYmOUSER
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off-shoot of some misty thoughts, on a misty shore
(what came to mind ofter i got the previously uploaded pix back) :lol:

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~AlecBell:iconAlecBell: Feb 21, 2008, 12:25:04 PM
Skeletal, original and adventurous.

I am usually too blind to see the merit of poetry's visual dimension.

My ears for ever clamour to hear. But this time I'm suspending disbelief.

--
There's always a better poem just out of reach.

"I'd tell you all my secrets but I lie about my past." Tom Waits

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