~ tension ~
i.
still. cool. silent the water waits.
ii.
one could almost feel the tension
thickening lengthening interminable;
yet daren't touch
dare not disturb
this Blessed Place
this Holy Peace
~ disturbance ~
iii.
patient. eager. anon, the ripple spreads.
iv.
ah! at last. it is done.
it is broken.
it is begun.
the energy imparted; a promise kept
stony silence
now a whisper
~ release ~
v.
hush now. wait for it.
it comes for you. it comes to you.
it comes.
echo.
anew.
~ gREY -







Devious Comments
I am usually too blind to see the merit of poetry's visual dimension.
My ears for ever clamour to hear. But this time I'm suspending disbelief.
--
There's always a better poem just out of reach.
"I'd tell you all my secrets but I lie about my past." Tom Waits
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